Bonjour, Pouvez-vous m,aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe, et si possible à perfectionner les formulations de mes phrases en anglais? Si quelqu'un pourra
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Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m,aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe, et si possible à perfectionner les formulations de mes phrases en anglais?
Si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider sa serait impeccable!
" Anthony Delapart is a young swimmer aged of 25 y.o who have disable, he is deaf...
First of all they are a negative side, for example: first,is difficult for his trainer to comunicate with him and second, during competitions he don't ear the beginig, so the trainer need to help him with a flag.
But his handicap help him to be more focused.
His dream was to beat a world record in order to show at people that he can do high level sport while having disabilities and furthermore to win a gold medal at paralymic games.
And Finaly, the values convoyed by his sport are: the respect for others, the fair-play and the courage"
Merci d'avance
Pouvez-vous m,aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe, et si possible à perfectionner les formulations de mes phrases en anglais?
Si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider sa serait impeccable!
" Anthony Delapart is a young swimmer aged of 25 y.o who have disable, he is deaf...
First of all they are a negative side, for example: first,is difficult for his trainer to comunicate with him and second, during competitions he don't ear the beginig, so the trainer need to help him with a flag.
But his handicap help him to be more focused.
His dream was to beat a world record in order to show at people that he can do high level sport while having disabilities and furthermore to win a gold medal at paralymic games.
And Finaly, the values convoyed by his sport are: the respect for others, the fair-play and the courage"
Merci d'avance
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Anthony Delapart is a 25 years old young swimmer who is disabled, he is deaf...
First of all, there's a negative side about it, for example, it is difficult for his trainer to communicate with him and secondly, he doesn't ear the start during competitions, so the trainer needs to help him with a flag.
But his handicap helps him to be more focused.
His dream was to beat a world record in order to show people that he can do high level sport while having disabilities and furthermore to win a gold medal at paralymic games.
Finally, the respect for others, the fair-play and the courage are the values that he has to have to play his sport.