Bonjour, Je suis entrain de préparer mon oral d'anglais sur le thème Mythes et héros et je voudrais que vous m'aidiez si il y a des erreurs ou autres. Voici mon
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Bonjour,
Je suis entrain de préparer mon oral d'anglais sur le thème Mythes et héros et je voudrais que vous m'aidiez si il y a des erreurs ou autres.
Voici mon introduction:
The notion i'm going to speak about is myths and heroes.
First, i'm going to define the notion of a myths which is an ancient story about gods, heroes and magic example the myth of Ouranos.
So, in relation to the notion heroes and myths.
My presentation will deal with this question: How can an ordinary person make the world a better place?
Firstly, I would like to say that a person can perform acts to improve the living conditions of other civilians such as Martin Luther king nut also Malcolm X and all those people who have protested against segregation, racism against Men of colors.
Then, explain what these great Men did for men of colors in the United States so that he could live as free and egalitarian civilians.
Finally, what to change since these heroic actions.
Merci à ceux qui m'aideront .
Je suis entrain de préparer mon oral d'anglais sur le thème Mythes et héros et je voudrais que vous m'aidiez si il y a des erreurs ou autres.
Voici mon introduction:
The notion i'm going to speak about is myths and heroes.
First, i'm going to define the notion of a myths which is an ancient story about gods, heroes and magic example the myth of Ouranos.
So, in relation to the notion heroes and myths.
My presentation will deal with this question: How can an ordinary person make the world a better place?
Firstly, I would like to say that a person can perform acts to improve the living conditions of other civilians such as Martin Luther king nut also Malcolm X and all those people who have protested against segregation, racism against Men of colors.
Then, explain what these great Men did for men of colors in the United States so that he could live as free and egalitarian civilians.
Finally, what to change since these heroic actions.
Merci à ceux qui m'aideront .
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1. Réponse alidernaika
Salut , on ne dit pas Firstly mais First of all sinon le reste me semble correct