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bjr qui pourrait me dire si j'ai bon dans ma lettre de motivation en anglais ainsi que les fautes merci à ceux qui pôrront m'aider
Dear Sir or Madam
I write this letter because i would to work in a Service Station Attentat weekends.
I'm 14 years old and i am a student.
I am interested for this job because i love motor vehicles and cars and i 'm not skin allergies and who enjoy pratical and manual work.
Thank you for you time and our attention.
Sincerely
Dear Sir or Madam
I write this letter because i would to work in a Service Station Attentat weekends.
I'm 14 years old and i am a student.
I am interested for this job because i love motor vehicles and cars and i 'm not skin allergies and who enjoy pratical and manual work.
Thank you for you time and our attention.
Sincerely
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1. Réponse colinpgm
Dear Sir or Madam
I write this letter TO YOU because i would LIKE to work in a Service Station AT weekends.
I'm 14 years old and i am a student.
I am interested for this job because i love motor vehicles and cars and I HAVEN'T GOT ANY skin allergies and I enjoy pratical and manual work.
Thank you for you time and our attention.
Sincerely
Très bonne lettre en général. J'ai mis en majuscule les corrections. Et n'oublie pas de mettre tous les " I " en majuscule ! -
2. Réponse LeeCorn
I would like*
I am interested in*
I do not have any skin allergies*
Thank you for your* time and your* attention.
(Les "i’m" c’est à éviter)
Mets une majuscule à chaque i de "I am"