Cc j'ai modifié et ajouter des choses vous pouvez me recorriger svp merci. Je dois créer superhero création kit. Je dois mettre: 1.supehero's Name. 2.superpower
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Cc j'ai modifié et ajouter des choses vous pouvez me recorriger svp merci.
Je dois créer "superhero création kit".
Je dois mettre:
1.supehero's Name.
2.superpowers
3.how did he/she get her powers
4.outfit
Et 5.code of honour
The name of my superhero is super sunman. Super sunman can go super fast,fly,be super smart and has super reflexes.
He comes from another planet.
super sunman is wearing a cloak, mask, sword, belt and boots.
He must help people, save the world, stop the surgeon and fight for justice.
Merci.
Je dois créer "superhero création kit".
Je dois mettre:
1.supehero's Name.
2.superpowers
3.how did he/she get her powers
4.outfit
Et 5.code of honour
The name of my superhero is super sunman. Super sunman can go super fast,fly,be super smart and has super reflexes.
He comes from another planet.
super sunman is wearing a cloak, mask, sword, belt and boots.
He must help people, save the world, stop the surgeon and fight for justice.
Merci.
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse Louise93
C'est bien mais, je te conseillerai pour:
Super sunman can go super fast,fly,be super smart and has super reflexes.
de le modifier par:
Super sunman can go super fast,fly. He is super smart and has super reflexes.
Voilà, j'espère t'avoir aidée. -
2. Réponse Pümpkin
Correction :
The name of my superhero is Super Sunman. Super Sunman can go super fast, fly, be super smart. He also has good reflexes.
He comes from an other planet.
Super Sunman wears a cloak, a mask, a sword, a belt and boots.
He must help people, save the world, stop the surgeon and fight for justice.
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